I am composing my first show and I have a few snippets of the first two movements I am doing. The sections are not in order, but it's just a sample of what I am doing. I could use some comments and criticism to make the show better. Thank you for your time. The first two movements are entitled War and Peace.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jA_STkBtY6s&feature=mfu_in_order&list=UL
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mMhWLao6BKc